Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Sappy

date: June 27, 2008

I haven't heard the original version of this song. But this cover makes me want to. Very well put together. Your sounds have the consistency of water, they flow so well together. Since this is covering a song, I can't exactly tell you to variate more or anything like that. But it is definitely an enjoyable listen.

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Short Jam

date: June 27, 2008

Is that you playing all those instruments? Not really my style of music, but I have to give you props for musicianship and your ability to compose. This song almost sounds like a fusion of two different styles, so more points there. Though, I can't pinpoint what style the bass line reminds me of. Keep it up. I'm probably going to go listen to some more of your stuff.

Score: 8

"Very Fun"

submission: ParagonX9 - Chaoz Impact

date: June 27, 2008

This song is very fun, and I can say that I've never heard anything like it so far in my natural life. I do think, though, that you could've found a better melody than that electricity buzzing in the second section of the song. Though, the vocal lead you put over it definitely compensated. All in all, great work.

Score: 10

"Wow"

submission: Joowna - Chilly Tonic

date: June 26, 2008

Exceptional progression. Extremely well mastered sounds. The name fits it perfectly.

Score: 10

"Beautiful"

submission: .: Beyond the Magic

date: December 9, 2007

Down to the very note, everything was perfection. I loved it. Had all the right elements, Excellent layer and melodies. Water-like flow. It was all around just beautiful. And of course, more credit to you for actually playing a piano for this. Keep it up. And I would love it if you looked at some of my stuff.

Score: 10

"Excellent"

submission: The Pond's Reflection

date: December 8, 2007

Always a lot of credit due when the instruments are actually being played. Very impressive. Excellent melody. Obvious proficiency in piano. Good structure. An overall excellent song.

Score: 7

"Solid Work"

submission: Spiriting away

date: December 7, 2007

The only thing I can really point for you to work on is maybe dynamic. The song seemed a little repetitive to me. Besides that, some nice layering and catchy melodies. I'm sure you'll only better, Keep it up, and I'd be honored to have you look at some of my stuff.

Score: 7

"Sweet"

submission: Altered State of Mind

date: December 7, 2007

Nice drum pattern transition and some definitely brooding effects. I understand the mood you were going for, but it really feels like the song developed itself when it hit the guitar part. The dark, industrial stuff could have been a nice, accenting introduction into a fuller song. I really think you should think about expanding on that guitar part. You have good beginning and ending segments, but the middle has more potential that you could be tapping into. Keep up the good work, and I would love it if you looked at some of my stuff as well.

Score: 7

"Nice"

submission: Thorns and Roses (vocals)

date: December 7, 2007

My only real stipulation is that the vocals are really muffled. I can't really understand you. Besides that, you have a solid vocal melody and some nice instruments. Maybe change up the piano melody when you go into the chorus. Otherwise, great structure.

Score: 8

"Soundtrack Music"

submission: Firey Groove

date: December 7, 2007

Definitely seems like music that would be on the SUPERBAD soundtrack. Got some nice groove and for a quick song, I'm digging it. Great sound quality. I'm not sure if you recorded those guitars or programmed them. Either way, nice job. I hope t hear more from you, and I would love to hear what you think of some of my stuff.