Score: 8

"Very Nice"

submission: The Phantom Was Framed

date: December 8, 2007

Intriguing story and animation. I just wish that you would have expanded more. Maybe have shown David prove his innocence. Tell why Bert was murdered. Definitely a great set up for a story. I enjoyed the movie, just wish it would've gone further. Otherwise, great work.

Score: 2

"It Was Okay"

submission: TIC -TAC -TOE

date: December 5, 2007

It didn't keep me interested for that long. Nice job on the graphics and everything, but maybe try and reinvent the concept somehow. I'm not much of a programmer myself, and I'm sure you put plenty of work into this. Hopefully, you learned some new tricks, and your next one will be even better. Just keep working hard and try to think more outside of the box.

Score: 7

"Good Points"

submission: Who Killed The Internet?

date: December 4, 2007

I can appreciate the humor and everything. I just found it a little hard to sit, through. It went from one person sitting at a computer desk to another, and it just felt long. I'm not sure how else to convey what you were trying to say, though. But like I said, I found it funny, just long. Solid animation, though. By the way, Muffin of Doom sounds like my type of guy.

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Sappy

date: June 27, 2008

I haven't heard the original version of this song. But this cover makes me want to. Very well put together. Your sounds have the consistency of water, they flow so well together. Since this is covering a song, I can't exactly tell you to variate more or anything like that. But it is definitely an enjoyable listen.

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Short Jam

date: June 27, 2008

Is that you playing all those instruments? Not really my style of music, but I have to give you props for musicianship and your ability to compose. This song almost sounds like a fusion of two different styles, so more points there. Though, I can't pinpoint what style the bass line reminds me of. Keep it up. I'm probably going to go listen to some more of your stuff.

Score: 8

"Very Fun"

submission: ParagonX9 - Chaoz Impact

date: June 27, 2008

This song is very fun, and I can say that I've never heard anything like it so far in my natural life. I do think, though, that you could've found a better melody than that electricity buzzing in the second section of the song. Though, the vocal lead you put over it definitely compensated. All in all, great work.